My least favorite charts of all time include clustered bar charts, 3D exploding pie charts, and line charts with two y axes. By now, hopefully you know my style. I’m not just going to complain about a graph without offering an alternative.

Sometimes we need to compare two different variables with two different units, like the total grants awarded by an agency (dollars) compared to the number of different projects that they supported (number of projects).

Your poor viewer would read the regular axis on the left. They’d probably understand that just fine–Total Grants Awarded. But then they’d have to figure out which line corresponds to that axis. And the separate legend below the graph isn’t helping much because it requires zig-zagging eye movements (no worries–solution here). Their eyes would eventually shift over to the right side of the graph. They’d they’d encounter another y axis. Another one? Wait, what? With different units? But I thought this graph was talking about grant dollars? Or is it about the number of projects? This is getting confusing. Okay, it’s not just the viewer confused here. It’s me. Every single time. I used to think these graphs were some kind of sick joke, or at the very least, had some type of virus that accidentally arranged two separate graphs right on top of each other.


Unless your viewer looks at graphs with double y axes every day (unlikely–be honest), this is the wrong graph type.

First things first. Present the first variable, Total Grants Awarded. You viewer can skim the shape of the line and think about the implications of the graph.


Nudge that graph over to the side:


And add the second variable beside it.

In my remake, I’m presenting the data piecemeal. Think about the order in which you want viewers to make sense of your graph. First, I want viewers to see the variable on the left. Second, I want them to see the variable on the right. emery_removing-double-y-axis_image07

The beauty of this revision is that I’ve got plenty of space for subtitles. I find interesting nuggets, like the minimum values, maximum values, averages, and totals, and add that background information in the form of a subtitle. I don’t hide the cool stuff in the paragraph above my graph or below my graph. I put the cool stuff in plain sight, right above the graph.


With my remake, I’ve got plenty of space to add a third variable if needed. First, my graph talks about the dollar amount given out. Then, my graph talks about how many projects were funded. The logical next step is to consider how the average project size has shifted over the years. That’s probably what my viewers would start wondering: If the agency’s total funding has remained pretty constant over the years… but the agency is funding fewer grantees… then, the average project size must be increasing, right? I try to anticipate what my viewers will be curious about and then I place the answers to their questions right alongside the other graphs. Not on the the next page. Not on the next slide. On the same page as the other related information.


The original graph with the double y axis didn’t let me show the graph in the correct order. I couldn’t show the graph in any order, actually. Both the variables were smushed on top of each other on the same graph. Now, my story has a beginning, middle, and end.

Join me at an upcoming training session to learn additional storytelling techniques. And bonus! Download my Excel file and practice adjusting my template with your own numbers.